Revere

We got our stories back today, and I got a 94%. I'm pretty happy with my mark; it's about what I would've expected. The strange thing is, though, on the ...

Thanks for replying, Cass, I do appreciate it more than you might think. All your suggestions make sense, and you pointed out a lot of things I didn't notice before. ...

One thing I wanted to point out was, the creature, having been transported from where it came, was, in my opinion, rather calm about the situation. Is it not confused, ...

Thank you all for replying. :D Bubblewrapped, I like your suggestions. They do seem to fit better. ibelieve_inme, I'm glad you liked it. Trident, no offense was taken. Your opinion ...

Hey Myth, Thanks for reviewing my story; your suggestions all make more sense than what I had. Actually, my teacher is a huge procrastinator, and we still haven't gotten these ...

Part Three- This was as equally done as the other three parts (and all those parts were well done!). Your charaterization is especially brilliant in this part. I really got ...

*Is confused* :?: I didn't write this, I just critiqued it. :?

Areida - [You asked about what I meant at the end of the third stanza.] I think I'm confusing you just at the end. The word 'origin' doesn't have any ...

I happened to notice that eveyone who has commented on this little piece thus far has been "male". So, with that fact in mind, I'd like to pose a question. ...

Thank you, trident! Dolores is supposed to be a neighbour of Dorothy's. I knew that in my head, but I guess I forgot to write it in. Hehe, that last ...

It's me again, I still completely agree with what I said the first time. This is a very, very, well written story, and I'm really liking where it's headed. One ...

Well as much as I appreciate all of your comments, I think I agree with Incandescence and DargquanQl'Deleodna. I think I'm going to take a break from poetry. Not because ...

Hello Sam - Thank you very much for your reply. I appreciate all your comments. About the what you said about the dates, I agree with you - but this ...

I liked this. Like Snoink, I thought it had a very honest and heartfelt feel to it. Your writing skills are beautiful, and your sentences and paragraphs are well structured. ...

Hi green_river, It's always reassuring to see somebody can elaborate on a definition. They are not, however, poets, and this is not, in fact, a poem. Shrubs are not awakened, ...