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Re: Who's Love? (Revised)
Thank you very much and I'll look for more suitable sections!
May 13, 2013 -
Re: Who's Love? (Revised)
Hello! Thank you for reviewing my work! I purposely ended slowly to show her calming down in a way and the narrator (Stella) is on a rant in her mind ...
May 10, 2013 -
Re: On a Starry Night
Hello; I just wanted to say welcome to YWS and complement you on your first poem! It's absolute gorgeous and I'm glad to see such skill. Other than that, I ...
May 10, 2013 -
Re: Who's Love? (Revised)
Thank you so very much for reading!
May 10, 2013 -
Re: Who's Love? (Revised)
Thank you very much for reviewing my work. And frankly I can't say it's Eire story or poem. I call it paragraphs poetry, but I believe the correct term is ...
May 10, 2013 -
Re: Who's Love? (Revised)
You're completely right. You made me relize something really important: to be myself. I attempted to format my writing like poetry because someone in a critque said to, but that ...
May 10, 2013 -
Re: Homage to the Heartbreaker
Ah, thank you for reviewing and noticing that my poetry differs from yours. You are very observant and I can see you like it done the way it should be. ...
May 9, 2013 -
Re: Homage to the Heartbreaker
Thank you very much for reviewing my poem! And, I like everything I write to be short and sweet, haha. So most of my writings will only be a few ...
May 9, 2013 -
Re: Homage to the Heartbreaker
Ah, thank you very much for the review. I'm very excited that you like it. And yes, it is meant to be read aloud to people with emotion and such. ...
May 9, 2013
