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Repose: The Armistice of a Delusional Youth and Radical Teen-ager

  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: Who's Love? (Revised)

    Thank you very much and I'll look for more suitable sections!

    May 13, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: Who's Love? (Revised)

    Hello! Thank you for reviewing my work! I purposely ended slowly to show her calming down in a way and the narrator (Stella) is on a rant in her mind ...

    May 10, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: On a Starry Night

    Hello; I just wanted to say welcome to YWS and complement you on your first poem! It's absolute gorgeous and I'm glad to see such skill. Other than that, I ...

    May 10, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: Who's Love? (Revised)

    Thank you so very much for reading!

    May 10, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: Who's Love? (Revised)

    Thank you very much for reviewing my work. And frankly I can't say it's Eire story or poem. I call it paragraphs poetry, but I believe the correct term is ...

    May 10, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: Who's Love? (Revised)

    You're completely right. You made me relize something really important: to be myself. I attempted to format my writing like poetry because someone in a critque said to, but that ...

    May 10, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Homage to the Heartbreaker

    Ah, thank you for reviewing and noticing that my poetry differs from yours. You are very observant and I can see you like it done the way it should be. ...

    May 9, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Homage to the Heartbreaker

    Thank you very much for reviewing my poem! And, I like everything I write to be short and sweet, haha. So most of my writings will only be a few ...

    May 9, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Homage to the Heartbreaker

    Ah, thank you very much for the review. I'm very excited that you like it. And yes, it is meant to be read aloud to people with emotion and such. ...

    May 9, 2013


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