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Thanks for the review! Thanks about the dream, I tried to capture that absolute weirdness and unnecessary scared-ness of dreams, when things that shouldn't scare you do, and all that. ...

Thanks for the review! Thanks about the dream, I tried to capture that absolute weirdness and unnecessary scared-ness of dreams, when things that shouldn't scare you do, and all that. ...

Hello again! Getting quite accustomed to your reviews, and I like it! Don't worry. I don't go too far into what the raids are in the first book. But in ...

Hello again! Getting quite accustomed to your reviews, and I like it! Don't worry. I don't go too far into what the raids are in the first book. But in ...

Thanks for another in depth review! What Brandr had done to Sigrid was pettier than she made it out to be. She was angry and upset about something her father ...

Hi! Thanks for the review! I've got to be a little brief, but I'll try and cover your notes. :) Folkvar is pretty much a catch in the village- ideal ...

Thank you so much for the reviewing! I've been in the Green Room a while so thanks for it. I usually type late at night (hence the weird grammar/spelling issues) ...

Thanks for the review! This book is almost done now (slowly uploading to YWS) and I'll use these for my rewrite afterwords. :) This is definitely one of the sections ...

The impact of this section will be seen later, but I will definitely rework the beginning. The problem with on YWS (and any typed version) is that I can't add ...

Again, thank you! I appreciate your thoroughness and dedication. I'll keep what you have in mind when I rip it apart.

Oh my gosh, thank you so much! I have noted the issues below, and am working my way through the editing process soon. I'm waiting until I complete the first ...

Thanks for the review! I'll keep that all in mind.

Thank you! I'll try and break the chapters into smaller chunks, and thanks for the critiques. :)

Thanks for the review! Yeah, my word processor is all weird and doesn't like keeping words like that in lowercase, so in my final draft I figured I'd just go ...

Thanks for the review! I'll see what I can do.