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Rena_Luvs_All

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: My heart is yours

    everything of yours that i read is great. this is perfect.

    Mar 21, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Tree

    2 words. it sucked. sorry. i just think it could have been a hundred and ninty-nine percent better.

    Mar 21, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Love's Suicide

    Cute but....Not Good. Try working On it.alot.

    Dec 25, 2007
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Her suicide note

    GOOD! but it kinda stuck out to me how you used "plagued" in the 4th and 6th stanza. other then that it was quick and to the point. GOOD.GOOD.GOOD.

    Dec 6, 2007
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Music Emotion

    it is really good! i like it!

    Nov 3, 2007


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