Rena0421

Hi, this was a very unique and interesting story. Everyone has basically touched up on everything so I'll leave my comment for what was good about the story. It was ...

ahhhhh. Why in the world did you write this? No, I don't ask in a bad way. I love this. I don't know why I love it so much but ...

Hi. I really liked this. I didn't think it was too descriptive or anything like that. It was perfect in that aspect. True, the title could use some editing itself ...

Hey! I'm Rena. Nice meeting you and welcome! We're all really nice here and you will have no problem fitting in at all. I'm like you in a few ways. ...

Um...there were those good parts in the story but for the better portion of the entire narrative, I was put to sleep. The characters are extremely flat and not well ...

Hey, This was very interesting. I liked how you retold the story and sort of gave the reader a recap of what happened earlier that night. The only thing that ...

Hey, Rena here. I don't have anything in regards of grammar or anything like that, more as interest. This was fairly interesting, I give you that. It makes me wonder ...

Hey. This was good but I won't lie, at first, I didn't understand it at all. It wasn't until someone said 'sex scene' that I was like...oh, he was drunk. ...

Hey, I'm Rena. First off, your title reminded me of The Fray as well and I was pulled in at once. I love that band. But back to the subject, ...

Well, really, everything that Kamas has said has covered it all. It was interesting how you described temptation and I enjoyed reading it. Recently, I've read the play, The Crucible, ...

I have to say, this was really nice. It was interesting. From the first to the second, I have a better understanding of who Connor is and what type of ...

Very interesting and well put together. Everything that I'd have said has already been said so I can only stand on a good foot. I liked it. It really seemed ...

Hi, I'm Rena. IT was good. The only thing that I'd say would be to mess around with it a little. It all seems so crammed and sped up. It's ...

Hi, I'm Rena. This was really interesting. I almost found myself not wanting it to end. It only seemed as if the narrator wasn't actually gay or bisexual or anything ...

Hi, I'm Rena. And yes, I like it so far. It had good detailing and expression. Keep up the good work. You'll be publishing that series in no time! PM ...