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It lacked sex. That's my only complaint. I could tell the character was supposed to be that way, so I didn't mind. But I was hoping for some smut.

If you're going to be like this, I won't bother with you anymore, and I doubt anyone else will either. I'm sorry I was harsh, but if you really enjoy ...

This week, I have come to a very simple conclusion about Canadian publishers who believe they are publishing books for teens. They suck.

It wasn't that bad. But I can tell that you wrote it on an implus. All it really needs, though, is more depth to make it feel real.

I can't remember exactly where I got this, but I read somewhere on this site: "Fashion is ugly. That's why they have to change it every six months."

It's not always necessary to have a consistant rhyming scheme, but in this case, it didn't really do anything for the poem. Another thing that might make it better is ...

I really don't get this. You're use of language is really good, but it's way to vague. Who is the narrator in this, and who is this mysterious "you". Very ...

Actually, there were a lot of things that made those elves different from humans. And so what if it's a fantasy? The dialogue still has to sound natural and real, ...

I kind of like it. It was good that you actually gave the character some kind of identity beyond "he" as so many people do when they don't want to ...

YAHOO! I finally finished it. Not I feel like I can actually post something else. All insults are welcome, though high praise and suggestions for improvement are prefered.

I'm just going to accept this for what it is and say I enjoyed reading it. Not exactly proper poetry, but I can tell it must have been a great ...

Go randomness! Me like muchly. Very amusing.

Absolutely beautiful! There aren't enough poets, especially teens, who write poetry about nature. Great work. Lovely imagery, and where you had rhyming, it worked really well.

Is this supposed to be an acknowledgement of the problems your country has?

Yes, I have.