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Sounded like you swallowed a dictionary.

How sad! Beautiful images at the beginning, and it all flowed very smoothly to it's conclusion.

It had an okay sound and a decent flow, but the langauge you used was very plain.

I'm also on the side of not asking questions. You can have the same effect without using actual questions by how you word sentence fragments. If you delve into the ...

Hey, everybody, check out the next two chapters. All insults and high praise welcome. (oh, and suggestions for improvement as well)

Not bad. The only thing I can think to say about it right now is that it might be better with shorter lines. Don't change them, just split them into ...

Actually what I have is very different from autism. I was very self-absorbed, but turned inward because of bad experiences, bullying and people reacting badly to unusual things I did. ...

Very nice. It really does show how kids change over time, as well as the characters and objects that have different meanings to them as they grow. I would love ...

I was going to say, "having some girl trouble, are we?" But I now retract that. Harsh.

It seems pointless because it's not finished yet. I can only stand typing for short periods of time, and I'm not the fastest typist out there. (It's finished now.)

Yoour welcome, and thanks. I find your custome rank very amusing.

It's really fascinating was caffien can do to us. I think I get it, and if I did, this was a fascinating way of putting it.

That's great if it's going to be something that's just for yourself. But if it's going to be something that other people will read, it has to have something that ...

Really powerful. Wasn't sure I understood what it was about until I read the last few lines, but It still managed to hold my attention.

I've looked over this a dosen times, and I don't see the spelling errors. I think what everyone thinks is errors is really just Canadian English.