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I really want to review this but it would be helpful to read chapters 1-6.

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I've been checking out your work. Overall it's good. Your descriptions are great and your writing style is going on the right track. Although, you sometimes make your characters act ...

Here is an article that really helps with outlining a plot

Wow. I think this was the most advanced writing I've read this website. First off your vocabulary excels. I had to look up so many words. Then there is something ...

Sorry on accident I submitted twice.

I am so glad you commented and like it. Honestly I had to write this at last second for a club as a short story. I LOVE romances too! Thanks ...

I forgive you. :)

I know it's a little late to reply again but reading it again I realized how adorable your comment was. :)

I didn't have that much to say.

To be honest your review was brutel but in a great way. I learned that I don't know how to fully accept critisms. You had different insight and higher standard ...

Thanks so much for reading all of the chapters. Your reviews were helpful and detailed. Also if you have any tips for characterization and editing I would apprechiate if you ...

Thanks for all the feedback and the little lessons with it. I do have trouble catching technical issues and I will try harder to catch them.

Oh yeah I already read it. I will review later

I get it. Should read more carefully next time.

Thanks a lot for the tips. I will be sure to do some more editing and revising. With the point of view errors I actually switched it from first to ...