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Re: A Modern Day Knight. Chapter 1.
I really love where this story is going and how it is playing out. But the school setting your creating seems for like a middle/elementary school than a highschool . ...
Jul 16, 2015 -
Re: Absolute - Chapter 1
This chapter just isn't drawing me in and I don't really see where this story is going when I saw the comment about the Cadillac I thought this story would ...
Jul 15, 2015 -
Re: Removed
The foreshadowing is too much you basically just told me the end of the book. If you want to write a romance novel I recommend you read a few like ...
Jul 15, 2015 -
Re: Introduction: A Fallen Place
This seems like a really interesting book but the time period is a bit weird because by around the 2400s we wouldn't even have to test humans so I would ...
Jul 15, 2015