Red_Star_Girl

I like it, It's quirky and cute, some of the rhyming is a bit questionable. I assume it's suppose to be lighthearted and not too serious, althought when I first ...

Hmmm. Well I don't want to be mean....here goes. To be honest it reminds me of the tragic sort of 'emo' type poetry I use to write as a kid, ...

I am inclined to agree with April here, the last stanza is a bit rushed almost, like you wanted to finish it so didn't put an awful lot of thought ...

I really liked this poem, it was very descriptive of being at a concert from both the artist and the crowds point of view. Really made you feel like you ...

I liked it, Although a few points to consider. Firstly, you said you didn't really know what it was about. With poetry thats the point, you have to know what ...

Hey :-) I agree with the last comment, Its a bit short, you should add to it and re-post it. But it looks like a very promising start to a ...