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thanks :)

haha thanks =]

ok i seperated it into stanzas. maybe that will make it less confusing... thanks for the help :)

hey thanks a lot :D This was a a true story that happened with more than one of my friends. but i don't really care anymore. i figure if they ...

thanks for the critiques ill try and fix it as best i can :)

Thanks for the comments :)

Thanks for the critiques! ill try an edit this :D

I dont get it. I typed this on Microsoft word with paragraphs, but when i submitted it on here they just left...

The story we wrote about them makes absolutely no sense and it was pointless. Because they were our english teachers, we purposely made it gramatically incorrect and we came up ...

One time when I was four i stuck a pen cap up my nose and went to the emergency room. It probably wasn't as bad as batteries, but still.... :D