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Hey guys I'm dying to get more reviews on this since it's been edited. I'm resisting the urge to repost it, but I want to know if the added details ...

Just wanted to stop by and see how your short story was coming along. I must say you've done a good job strenthening you story with this last edit. Still ...

Oh, anytime! Welcome to YWS by the way, I see your new. You're not used to writing in Enlglish? Where are you from? -Carly

Thank you, Lava! I appreciate your input, and I'm working on another edit now. -Carly

Wow! thanks so much! I've missed seeing you around :) There's actually an updated version of this posted now "Dakota's Diary Chapter 2" there's parts one and two because it ...

Aw! Thanks Jasminebells! I'm so glad you liked it, and when you have more time, I'd love to get a review from you!

Captain classy! : My thirteen year old IS very smart, she's even in a 'gifted and talented educational resources program'. She's going through her roughest times yet, her mom left ...

So this interesting thing about this poem is that it's supposed to be a piece found in a dramatic 13 year old girls diary in a novel I'm writing. I ...

Elope is running away to get married rather than having a wedding. Thanks Mo!

Thanks you guys! I'm so glad you like it! If you want more go to Dakota's Diary Chapter 2 part 1, it needs reviews badly. Even if you like it, ...

Hey Leeanna! Thanks SO much for the review, I'm glad you liked it. I'm very glad you took time to read it, I know it's long. Please, if you have ...

Your welcome :) Please send me a pm when you get it on utube! I'd love to see it come alive. I see you haven't received many reviews, I haven't ...

You guys are breaking my heart! Why the lack in reviews? I won't let you read the journal entry until someone picks this half apart! I challenge YOU! :) please?

Thank you octocoffee! I whinned and cried and got what I wanted, ha! That's probably not a good lesson to teach me. I really appreciate that you took the time ...

Aw! You guys :)