RedHeathen

Thanks so much for the review! You're right the millimeter thing was a bit too meticulous, so I edited it. With others though, for some reason the story doesn't seem ...

Haha thank you. Out of curiosity, which sonnet was your personal favorite?

Thanks for the review, Pearl, and I'm happy you enjoyed it! With, "what's to lose, or even gain", was saying if pleasure and pain are one and the same or ...

Thanks a ton for your review! Since I copied and pasted the sonnets from google docs, the formatting and capitulation was weird, but I'll definitely look out for that next. ...

I am really happy you enjoyed it! I will stick to avoiding conjunctions (see? I am doing it right now!) and I will go for more juicy adjectives! Thank you!

Thanks so much for your review! I agree with you, I need to work on structuring my writing more and adding more detail, or else it becomes all muddled. Looking ...

Argh, meant to edit this review by clicking back on the page, but it created a whole new review unbeknowenst to me. See above, and sorry!