Rebelle

This was... beautiful. I can't even think of another way to describe it. Angel's emotions and struggle to discover what he really wants in life, and all the symbolisms brought ...

I thought it was terribly sad that those girls fell to such things so young... But the emotion and symbolism and imagery in the story really brought it to life. ...

I liked it and the emotion in it, but I had a few focus issues with it. Stanza 6 and 7 seemed very random and didn't really fit the whole ...

Again, I loved the imagery and fantasy in your work. It flows beautifully, and every word has a delicate and nearly hidden meaning. Just a question, but are you a ...

I liked it, the romance of it. Very good descriptions, and the only problem I had was the first few lines of the second stanza. They didn't seem to fit ...

I think you could have done a little more in depth on the "savior" Trebt, saying how maybe she saw him in a different light now or something. Otherwise I ...

I liked the message you were trying to convey about individuality, but some of the stanzas seemed too forced. In the second stanza, if you changed "It's like people." to ...

At first I felt reluctant to read this, just because the beginning paragraphs were so simplistic, but I realize now that that happy, simple way of writing it made it ...