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*snorts* James is evil in that scene with Simone. Highly amusing... Alex continues to scare me... And poor Sunshine.. I can only pity the girl. So... Ann doesn't like babies ...

I think James and Luke are trying to prove Lena right with that last scene. ;) lol. Another great episode. I'm actually kind of surprised Michael asked her out after ...

^^ Another great episode. The fact that James and Luke are so afraid of a little mouse amuses me to no end. I don't agree that Lena's parents were just ...

I likes! Yay! James is back! "I can has cheeseburger, please?" - can I put that in my sig? I love that line... I can so picture Luke with a ...

*giggles* Lovely! I was shocked to see Lena and Sunshine actually being.. -nice- to each other... Okay, maybe not nice... but definitely more than civil. Ann gains points! She is ...

I can't believe James is leaving! Crazy. *pouts* He'd better be back.. That's like when they went and made Daniel ascend on SG-1. Terrible. Though, I do have to say ...

*giggles* That entire bedroom scene between James and Luke was awesome... I almost died laughing.. I want to see this played out just to hear someone actually speak the ellipse. ...

To clarify.. bold are corrections I've made.. I won't always comment because somethings seem obvious to me.. some are just typos.. and I just don't have the energy to explain ...

hmm.. Another excellent episode. I hate you for leaving it hanging like that, but I suppose that's a good thing. Means you've held my interest. Even more so than with ...

Mom and I spent most of the say at the train station or on the train. - Just a typo here.. I think you meant "day", not "say". But Dad ...

A Gravestone Made of Wheat - Title of a book should be either italicized or underlined Will Weaver grew up on a dairy farm located in Minnesota. The sheriff said ...

shoved m e forward toward the bottles. Much better, Jabber. This actually manage to keep interest. It flowed rather nicely and the dialogue didn't throw me a bit. ^^ It ...

No one knew where the name came from, how it was thought up, why it was given to him, but it was appropriate, so it stuck. - I think this ...

The royal palace glowed from several hundred brass bowls of lit oil, and they burned red, gold, and white; the color was altered by chemists’ powder [s]in the mixture[/s], and ...

The commoners weren't allowed the oil and wood that the nearby vine farms provided, though many of them worked there. They cheated instead, taking the smaller sticks they were allowed ...