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Raziza

Raziza

  • Poetry » General, General Re: Contradictions of Life

    This is a very smart poem. Detailed, yet subtle on the point. Great way to leave it up to interpretation for the reader. I agree with A786, the line "boys ...

    Feb 6, 2014
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Pendulum of Fate

    Great piece. The feel and flow to the story is amazing. The separation of the sentences and theme is brilliantly creative. The entire feel is great. Though this is probably ...

    Feb 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: Nobody Sees

    Quick review: This is an amazing poem. The social commentary is very deep. Everything fit in together perfectly and fluidly. Credit goes out to your friend. My only real grievance ...

    Feb 5, 2014


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