Raziel

After a long long time, I'm back to action! xD I picked up a random short story and I started reading this one. Although I did not read the other ...

I love this one! I almost laughed at the beginning, but as I was reading I started to realize the real depth of your work. It made me think, and ...

Although I am not much interested on the story (yet), your writing style is just amazing. :D There are few things that need to be worked out, but I see ...

My god, I definitely want to know how this story continues and (unfolds)! You put just the right amount of description (in my humble opinion) and you combined it with ...

To be honest, I’m enjoying the story so far. However, like maegardens warned you, try to not use too many comparisons. I know that this is only the prologue, but ...