Rayneisthename

uhhhhhhhh. Is this a joke or like a metaphor for something? Because I don't want to go all deep on you if there's really no need for it.

I like this poem very much. I think that a lot of people can relate to this, even myself. But will they be there in the end? that was the ...

I definetly think that you should continue this, its good. The last paragraph got me confused with all the names and whatnot. But I can relate to this. Keep going, ...

Thanks for all the reviews! @ Butterfinger- There really is no special connection between the poem and the title for the readers, because it is more of a personal thing. ...

I like this poem a lot. It reminds me of my great-grandmother and I. It makes me sad, but that isn't always a bad thing. Keep writing like this and ...

The whole theme of this poem was a boy who can't make up his mind between two girls, and when he realizes she is the right girl for him, she ...

Oh my god, thank you! Thanks for the review (and the tearsXD!) I understand about what you said about how it didnt take much for him to quit, my teacher ...

Well, this poem is really interesting..... In the beginning it is really confusing but by the third stanza the fog kind of clears up. I just really think you should ...

Thank you snailsareslimy! Thanks for the advice:)

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Thanks for reviewing and I understand about some of the lines not flowing as well as others. I had kind of a tough time with this poem because this is ...