RayneBow

Short. Simple. Yet, once again, an amazing poem! How do you do it?! (; I really like this. I cant tell if it should be a depressing poem, like 'waah, ...

Wow. Just..uhm..wow. Okay just a few things! 1. This poem is very.. well honestly its a bit disturbing. I feel so bad for the child who has been hurt, and ...

Hmm. I like this poem. Its a bit confusing, but I think I got it. (: At first I thought the poem would be about how the family was living ...

Wow. Just.. wow. This poem is deep and gripping. How you potray your thoughts and feelings makes it seem as if Im actually there. I like how this poem flows, ...

i really like this story! Its short, but subtly hints at the begining. my fellow classmates board the bus and walk right passed me without a care in the world. ...

i really like this! The last line seems irrelevant, but thats just my opinion. Im sure it makes sense with the picture you talked about! (: I really like this ...

This gave me chills! I like how you were vagualy descriptive but at the same time you potrayed your thoughts very well. My favorite part would have to be : ...

I really liked this poem. My favorite part was this; How in the world could this happen to me? When all I wanted was not to bleed. Your really good ...