Ravingmoon

You will find out when I post the rest as to why he punched instead of slashed. The point of the caps was to make Luna seem over dramatic. But ...

That was interesting. Very detailed and very in your face, so to speak. I must say that I thought it was very well done. Although, you are too quick to ...

Sounds a bit dark. It also sounds like you are chasing something that cannot be caught. This poem has a bit of a sad twist to it that makes me ...

Better?

It is alright. And i get what you mean. I ran through it quickly because when I get an idea, I have to get it down quick. And the scene ...

. . . . . Luna is a guy. .. . . .