Ravenna

Hmmmm....I never read it aloud before but you're right. To fix or not to fix..........

I love it not only because it's so creative and beautiful, but because of its truthfulness and simplicity. I'll print it out and hang it in my room if you ...

Firestarter: Yeah, you're right. The sentences use complicated words and structure. I need to cut out a bit of that. So which one is it...cheesy? fruity? or both? LOL. Just ...

Thanks for the constructive criticism Wulie!