RavenNaal

Thank you for your review! Its good to hear what parts of the poem spoke out the most to you and your feelings on it. Again, thanks!

Thanks for the review! Glad you enjoyed the theme of the story and you were able to connect with it. Thanks for the critiques as well, always glad to hear ...

Glad to hear your advice, as my first poem im sure their were a lot of things that need to improve. So im glad you let me know. Ill be ...

Your review was just fine, glad to hear you liked the beginning! Almost every piece I've had the paragraph size is still a probem, so ill be sure to keep ...

Glad to hear you liked it! I always like leaving my pieces off with something ominous or questioning. Thanks for the review!

Glad you enjoyed it! Always happy to hear a review : )

This poem is really good! I love the theme/topic of passing on hate and anger from generation to generation, and you wrote it into words beautifully. It was clear what ...

Thank you for blessing us all with this masterpiece. Never in my life have such true words been spoken. You have touched my heart and left a tear down my ...

Glad to hear you liked it! I will certainly be writing more whenever I have time. I will also make sure to space out my writing for the readers, and ...

Thank you so much for the review. I totally agree with the paragraphing, spacing it out a little more, or at all, would have gave readers more space to digest ...