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The opening lines — “What is it you want, child of the world? / I’ll make it come true. Just say a word.” — immediately set up a dialogue. The ...

Hello Winny! Thank you for taking the time to read over my story and comment on it, you are amazing!!! I do understand what you are mentioning, I decided to ...

Hello Valkyria!!!! Yes, I did get that comment on the mystery element so I changed the genre to better relate to the story, there are mystery elements but its mostly ...

HELLO MESSY! I really wanna thank you for reading my story, it means a lot to me! I did fix some things you suggested in here, I just hope they ...

Hello!! Thank you for taking the time to read through my work, and I love hearing your thoughts on it. Firstly, it seems that I should have been more careful ...

Hi CATS, thank you for taking the time to read my story again!! Kei and Kukui are pretty nice together, i hope it stays that way. I also did some ...

Thank you so much for your review Andrew, being able to take time out of your day to read my story fills me with joy. I hope you do come ...

If someone had told me there was such a great community online such as this one last year, I wouldn't believe it. I enjoy reading so much and to be ...

IT IS AN HONOR TO HAVE YOU READ MY WORK CATS!!!! I cannot thank you enough for taking time to read my story, it means the world to me. Your ...

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This piece is striking for its commitment to atmosphere and tone. From the very first chapter, Crimson’s sense of isolation is clear, and it threads itself consistently through every scene. ...

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This piece is striking for its commitment to atmosphere and tone. From the very first chapter, Crimson’s sense of isolation is clear, and it threads itself consistently through every scene. ...

Hi CATS, Thank you for responding and reading my story! Your review was very detailed, i enjoyed reading all of what you thought and wanted to say! Greif is a ...

ITS SO GREAT TO HEAR FROM YOU DRSTELLAPEPPER! Thank you for your amazing review and comment, I am glad you were able to read my story. I like to be ...

This was my first story on this website and I must say I am interested. I wouldn't say I am a RL Stein fan but I did enjoy Goosebumps and ...