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Yes it does invoke an unease when ready which was the point. The narrator's voice is very idolatry

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HI noridori!, I enjoyed your review thoroughly. I love that you were able to find my story enjoyable too!!! I do have to say that I am revising this story ...

Thank you Ehawthorne (its so funny to think you have the last name of Cassandra) I enjoyed your review thoroughly and cant wait to see what you make of chapter ...

Thank you Ehawthorne (its so funny to think you have the last name of Cassandra) I enjoyed your review thoroughly and cant wait to see what you make of chapter ...

Hello Juulman, Thank you for taking the time to read through my story and comment on it. I can't say how excited I was to see that I had succeeded ...

Hi Tikaya! It is a pleasure to hear from you!! I did fix the chapter mishap. I don't know how I overlooked that.

Omg, Alex. Thank you truly. This means more than I can explain, especially knowing you%u2019re choosing to read for yourself and that you picked my story for that. I am ...

I see I have much work to do, thank you for this! I do see what you mean though with the way i plot things out and dont go into ...

i just wanna say i am taking notes from everything you say. I have many revisions to do!!

Hello Messenger, I always am so glad to hear from you, I thought you had forgotten about this story! I do understand what you mean with these comments. I tried ...

i really enjoyed this poem Cat, it really made me think about a lot of things. You are an amazing poet!

I had wondered for so long how to do that, it reminds me of html coding! I will fix that cleavage line!!

Hi Messy! It is good to hear from you, how have you been taking care? I always thought of Sugei's transformation into Marin as him changing his hair, speech, behaviors ...

Thank you so much! I wasn't sure if it was okay to use someone else's format but I really enjoyed your format/method!!!!