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Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 22
Hi Tikaya! It is a pleasure to hear from you!! I did fix the chapter mishap. I don't know how I overlooked that.
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Re: Eternal Beauty | Prologue
Omg, Alex. Thank you truly. This means more than I can explain, especially knowing you%u2019re choosing to read for yourself and that you picked my story for that. I am ...
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Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 11
I see I have much work to do, thank you for this! I do see what you mean though with the way i plot things out and dont go into ...
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Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 8
i just wanna say i am taking notes from everything you say. I have many revisions to do!!
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Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 18
Hello Messenger, I always am so glad to hear from you, I thought you had forgotten about this story! I do understand what you mean with these comments. I tried ...
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Re: Judged
i really enjoyed this poem Cat, it really made me think about a lot of things. You are an amazing poet!
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Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 16
I had wondered for so long how to do that, it reminds me of html coding! I will fix that cleavage line!!
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Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 16
Hi Messy! It is good to hear from you, how have you been taking care? I always thought of Sugei's transformation into Marin as him changing his hair, speech, behaviors ...
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Re: chapter one: its a music minefield
Thank you so much! I wasn't sure if it was okay to use someone else's format but I really enjoyed your format/method!!!!
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Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 14
Hello Joj0! It is great to have you here, and thank you for taking the time to read my story!!!! Your words inspire me to keep writing and keep improving ...
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Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 13
HELLO MESSY!!!! I love reading your reviews so much, they are very insightful! Yes, I did notice that some of my writing here was a bit contradictive... The Marin we ...
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Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 12
Hi Cats, it's great to hear from you!!! I am starting to think that this delete thing is a formatting error from where I copy paste my chapters from to ...
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Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 11
Hello Messy! Thank you again for taking the time to read my story. I also agree that I do need to further improve on my writing structure. I have taken ...
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Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 10
Hi Messy!! Its great to always hear from you. I did fix many of the things you suggested in this chapter. And I added more at the end, I can ...
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Re: What is Love?
I hope you dont think it is... I tried to spent a decent bit writing this, your poem was very interesting to think about
Sep 11, 2025