Rascalover

Thanks everybody for the great critques!!!!!

ow thanks for the awesome critque

Thank you so much. Im glad you think I have captured a four year old perfectly, because I dont think I have. I want her to be more realistic to ...

ohhhhhh... well im looking forward to the content of the book; its just the way its written its hard for me to follow

Your characterization is absolutely magnificent. there isn't any thing to complain about and I can't find much i have commented on... such a greatr story I cant wait to read ...

Thanks!!!!!! And ok

ok thanks for the reveiws this chapter wasn't my best and i keep changing the plot in my mind sooo... maybe that's the problem

kay thanks!

Wow, This is an awesome piece of work! I really like the beginning it draws the reader in. You have pure talent here. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK -Tiffany

YAY ahah, I| have a problem my self keeping interest in a story so I try to make it my best effort to make it interesting enough for people to ...

Wow thank you so much for your reveiw. I am glad you liked I wasn't sure if any one would. This is my first serious story so I am trying ...

*bump*

Ahaha I don't know why it looks funny but it does. IU finally finished the play/book and I actually liked it. It was definitly better than The Awakening

As im starting this i can see that. its not apparent early on that her husband is a jerk, maybe hes just the norm for his time

Since this is for school I can't choose the book I read but I might go check that out anyway