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Wow. This is so true and so beautiful... I'm a Christian as well, and I sometimes feel really lost and alone in this world - this really captured that. There ...

I got excited the moment I read this - I've actually long considered doing an SSBB fanfic for a long time, but never actually did... I love the game, so ...

Holy cow. This is amazing. People like that are the lowest of low, and yet somehow it always feels like they win. I hate it - injustice is one of ...

Hi again! I absolutely loved this chapter - it had a lot more about the thoughts and motives of Dandelion, and I felt more like she was a real person, ...

Hi Payne! Great piece! I liked the character of Matt especially - he seemed like a peaceful, sentimental type of person. I agree with a previous comment, though - beating ...

I like this idea a lot - it seems pretty exciting - but there is one huge problem that almost kept me from finishing this: The story is so long. ...

Hi there! I like this start - it has potential to go anywhere - but I do have a few points that I think are affecting the whole piece: Firstly, ...

This is beautiful! It sounded very flowery and delicate, just like what you were describing! I loved all the description and ornate words, but I was a little thrown off ...

Angels are becoming more and more popular these days, but the mood and style of this somehow seems to overcome that staleness. I adored this piece - the name 'Wings' ...

So I saw the words 'Monty Python and the Holy Grail' and would have fallen off my chair, but I was too busy scrambling for the mouse. It actually took ...

I really, really like this beautiful piece! It says so much about friends and comrades that everyone can relate to, and yet it sets a goal to think like that ...

I love this - it sets up a great background for the end of the 6th book. It matches up beautifully with Draco's actions later in Rowling's books. However, I ...

I am completely jealous. I adored this piece!!! The style alone is amazing! I loved the blunt, disapproving mood in the city - it was a splash of cold humor ...

I like this - it's a good, dark subject, and with just a bit of touching up it has the potential to be an amazing piece. It looks like you've ...

Augh!! Sannah!! Why can't I make plots like you?! This is only chapter two, and it's already so intense !! I love it! I do tend to agree with Writer97 ...