Ranger51

Hello there! Good job on this... but first thing first! I shall proceed to nitpick! Chapter One The ringing alarm felt like it shot through my whole body, (That should ...

Hi, Sannah!! I absolutely love this! I've always hated how people let others mold their personalities. If was kind of funny for me, though, because my cousins' dog is named ...

Awesome! I had the same misgivings as a lot of people when I started reading this, before I discovered the awesome awesomeness of this awesome tale. This is one of ...

Cheers to Harry Potter! That was an absolutely amazing video - perfect music and perfect scenes! J.K. Rowling created something magical, not just words on paper. As much as I ...

Hi there! I love the Legend of Zelda (even though I've only played Twilight Princess), and I was really excited to see this. But, the only problem I have is... ...

This is amazing! I loved how the first sentence was so peaceful and relaxing, and then you realize that the character has been shot. However, I have one question and ...

You know, it still hasn't really sunk in for me that it's all done... mostly because I haven't seen the last movie yet. (We got dragged off to the beach ...

Ooooh! Tell me there's a part three!!! This was great! I didn't get bored once - I don't know why you'd think I would. I loved the scene with Aunix ...

Very good! I don't know if you can edit this or not - I've never done a contest before. I would imagine you could until the deadline, but if you're ...

Hi there! This is pretty good - I adore Aunix, she's the cocky, often-disdainful spy/thief/assassin sort of character you can't help but love. She's awesome! :D You really took off ...

This was very well written - I loved the dark mood and the way emotion muddled the narration. You captured the mood perfectly with an ornately poetic yet brutally honest ...

I'm not sure why this showed up under fantasy... but I like it! My name is Devin. You'll probably hate me. Everybody does. This is my story. Read it. It ...

Awww.... last chapter (so far). I've kind of gotten addicted to this... You MUST post more... I'm going to get lonely without Zavier and Victor and Zoey... Okay, now for ...

AOk. Victor, please keep an eye on Timmy while I=m gone, make sure he gets anything he needs. ”

I really like this so far! (I saw chapter fifteen of this and was curious, so I went back to chapter one and started reading.) However, there's just one thing ...