RandomxStoryteller

This is really great! You use a lot of really cool adjectives and that makes the story flow really well. I have one suggestion: She pulled her sketchbook out of ...

This is really good and funny! Now, I'm just nitpicking, as the beginning dream part didn't flow really well. Maybe you can change it to a flashback, or maybe Joseph ...

Dear Sheyren, WOW! Soo good! This has got to be one of the best stories I've ever seen. You put so much detail into this without cluttering the work which ...

Hello Bloodlord!! This poem is really great, and I've read it three times over and it still brings tears to my eyes. I really like the repeated line because it ...

OML! It's soo perfect! I swear this is already perfect enough to be put in the movies! Wouldn't it be funny if they added this song/parody to the end of ...

Is there going to be another chapter? I love the Lion King soo much, so I think this story is great, and it hold's the reader's interest very, very well. ...