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  • Poetry » General, General Re: please, could you meet me at the cemetery?

    This poem is dark, haunting, and genuinely evocative. It feels like a conversation between someone who is grieving and someone they can no longer reach. But what makes it interesting ...

    21h ago
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: Do you hope or do you despair?

    The poem has a nice questioning structure,it feels as if it interrogates someone’s conscience and the imagery is surreal do your fingers brush against the leaves that witnessed the unforgettable ...

    Oct 3
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Eclipse's embrace

    This poem reminds of Icarus.you made it feel like a huge mythological universe and the imagery is so good! The poem has a actual progression showing story-like narration.the ending is ...

    Oct 3


Poetry is my cheap means of transportation. By the end of the poem the reader should be in a different place from where he started. I would like him to be slightly disoriented at the end, like I drove him outside of town at night and dropped him off in a cornfield.
— Billy Collins