The moon slumbers and turns
Shhh, don't wake
You'll hear the the melody singing a tune
To quiet the asteroids and rocking moon
Sitting, in a empty room
You want to fly
Only time will tell
When your consumed by the void
You, won't see a thing
A pressure you cannot avoid
Feel the heat
Don't breathe
Maybe run
Or face the anger and wrath of the blistering sun
You dare disturb the lining of the stars, planets and her moon
You'll have wished you hadn't done so at all soon
Best prepare for your wings to melt, wannabe Icarus
You've gone to far, above and beyond
Pay the price with the sunny side
And a sword men's swing
Go home, to Mother Gaia
The sun is not so merciful
As your plentiful land claims to be
Just leave
Just leave the sun and her moon to cradle
the souls that keeps them tied
A love never ending, a moon will only shine with their sun looking at her slowly with tender care
So leave.....
Leave them be
Or face a lover's embrace broken
Of who they can't stand not to be near another
Leave, leave, and go
And never turn your shoulder back when you fall, you have been warned...
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