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Re: A First Attempt
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Apr 7, 2008
Cute cute cute, Jabber! Nice and light, not like some poetry (I'm such a hypocrite, just posted like the saddest poem I've written... well, sad for me...). I really enjoyed ... -
Re: A First Attempt
Cute cute cute, Jabber! Nice and light, not like some poetry (I'm such a hypocrite, just posted like the saddest poem I've written... well, sad for me...). I really enjoyed ...
Apr 7, 2008 -
Re: Reverting-Part 1
Thanks. I fixed that mistake in the punctuation. I think I'm just going to go with my gut and leave it that way, even if it only appeals to those ...
Apr 7, 2008 -
Re: Suffocating
Thanks for the help! I've made some changes... Is it better?
Apr 7, 2008 -
Re: Reverting-Part 1
Thanks so much for the helpful advice! I certainly don't want to bore people... Please look out for the next sections, as they get better! I did add some dialogue ...
Apr 5, 2008 -
Re: Going Solo
Yeah, I liked this, but just so you know, Roald Dahl wrote an autobiography called Going Solo... Not that it's relevant. Anyhow, the title caught my eye, and was perfect. ...
Apr 3, 2008 -
Re: Through the Poppies
Wow, I loved this! Simple, yet elegant and refined. You have a great writing style! I can't think of any criticism, I just know I'm going to bed happy! Thank ...
Apr 3, 2008