RamonGalvez

yo yo YO rubersoul. Me likey. gonna hit you with the old in-line citation. I was told I'm allowed to copy an entire work and punch it with parentheticals as ...

LOL, I'll call the voice of this poem Art right now. gonna bouta hit ya w/ the glow-grow-glow sandwich, sister. GLOW NICE!! ok so the sparrow metaphor that opens this ...

ok so first of all Heaven. they're in heaven but still sad?? which like, Yeah. that tracks actually. the reaper shows up and is like "life is cruel death is ...

Hello, FarDusk! All right, so the first stanza hits me nice and soft and gives me the sense of chill. Nodes on the Weave made me picture little stars of ...

Hello, Calaway! I was told I can copy your work below and then do in-line feedback texts. I'll put them in {braces}, so if you want a quick way to ...

I tried to do in-line critique mode, putting my feedback in braces: Long, spindly striped arm Reaching from a hidey-hole in my wall Sweet raspberry tart in ebony claw An ...

I didn't know fluff was a genre. I really like fluff as a genre. I like the pleasant, feel-good works. “Technically yes, but don’t you dare try.” I love it. ...

“about it. My parents” i think this is supposed to be a comma. In this portion, there’s a bit of confusion. The reader might think that this is Ariyana talking, ...

My goodness, there's really something here. Something powerful. And by the end of it, I feel like I took mushrooms or something, lol. The first mention of the lion, by ...

I love it. I think you did an excellent job establishing a "REAL" world. It has an economy, social dynamics, etc. I noticed this especially when I read that there ...