Rakun

Hey, I liked it since it is from a soldier set up in the WWI. It would be wonderful to create a book full of the soldier's letters to his ...

Such as I have told sometimes, I am not good on reviewing poetry but I am trying my best because I want to improve my poetry skilss by the time ...

Ok, it's going to be my first time reviewing a lyrics/poem. First, I like it because is straightforward and smooth. However, I would add a word to join together two ...

I really loved it, but my question remains on the first sentence "Water ... flame..." I mean, I can relate the sun with red color so it bleed. Then, the ...

Just to make sure, though, I stretch out my hand and brush against her familiar skin. How is her skin? How feels her skin? Is bronw? ligth? brigth? fresh? cold? ...

You repeated many times the word feel (in any verb tense: felt, feeling, ect...). Try other word. Ok, I am not sure if I am rigth, but remember, ACTIVE setence, ...

Use article and preposition on first paragraph, third line (my corrections are in bold ): at the Aimee's house. Okay, second paragraph, the first line you are using two -ing ...