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Re: Alpha & Zee [Untitled] - Ch. 1
Okay, that was interesting. It's good that you're telling it the 'story telling' way. But to give you some comments, it kind of breaks the flow because of the mentioning ...
Mar 25, 2012 -
Re: Keychain Magic Prologue
Hi. I know it's a lot late to post this review because it had been almost a month since you've posted it. I've read the description of your plot, and ...
Feb 6, 2012 -
Re: Removed
Hi, Volleyball13! First of all, I have to say that I love your story. I think the background(forest etc.) is great. The plot's quite okay, too. So, it's like horror, ...
Jan 18, 2012
