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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Alpha & Zee [Untitled] - Ch. 1

    Okay, that was interesting. It's good that you're telling it the 'story telling' way. But to give you some comments, it kind of breaks the flow because of the mentioning ...

    Mar 25, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Keychain Magic Prologue

    Hi. I know it's a lot late to post this review because it had been almost a month since you've posted it. I've read the description of your plot, and ...

    Feb 6, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Removed

    Hi, Volleyball13! First of all, I have to say that I love your story. I think the background(forest etc.) is great. The plot's quite okay, too. So, it's like horror, ...

    Jan 18, 2012


He began to wonder why he had felt uneasy at all. It was like a man wondering in broad daylight why a dream had appeared so terrible to him at night.
— Chinua Achebe, Things Fall Apart