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  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 8

    woohoo!! excited to know what this is all about!

    Jul 10, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Humor Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 4

    Oh it is?? Yeah, that makes sense lol xD I%u2019m excited to uncover more!!!

    Jun 26, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 3

    Makes sense! I did get that forgetful vibe, though!!

    Jun 20, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 1

    Hey! Just a quick comment about the Ella section before I head over to chapter 3: I like how we get a bit more of Ella's personality and background here! ...

    Jun 20, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic Re: When I Was Anna - 5

    Oh okay. That makes a lot more sense haha!! :p

    Jun 19, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 1

    Yay! I%u2019m excited to read more. That%u2019s quite the contest!

    Jun 18, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: When I Was Anna - 2

    Oh dang :0 Yeah, my school doesn%u2019t even have a marching band, so I just have absolutely no idea hahaha

    Jun 13, 2019
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Greta Thunberg as a Model Global Citizen

    Aw man, that%u2019s too bad. Glad it helped anyway though!

    May 13, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Science Fiction Re: The Variants

    Hey - I%u2019m a mod here on YWS. It%u2019s a bug - it happens sometimes. No worries though! I went ahead and deleted the other two comments. :)

    Apr 11, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: Peace and Peaches - Chapter 2

    For some reason I JUST saw this. I must have missed the notification D: Anyway, thank you! I%u2019m always looking to improve my dialogue because I%u2019m definitely a more dialogue-heavy ...

    Feb 24, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: Peace and Peaches - Chapter 2

    Thank you!! I will definitely work to add more sensory details to future chapters - I agree that I don%u2019t do much of that ahah. Thanks again!

    Jan 17, 2019
  • Short Story » Romantic, Narrative Re: A little bit of love.

    Ah I see! Glad it helped!

    Jan 10, 2019
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: No more tears (Draft 3.0)

    Oh! Good luck with the contest! :)

    Dec 28, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Blue Arrows ~ Chapter 4 ~ Truth

    Yeah!!! Totally makes sense. That%u2019s good though, it eliminates the fear of being perfect haha

    Dec 15, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: No more tears

    Sure, I%u2019d love to give my thoughts on a rewrite!

    Dec 13, 2018


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