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Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 8
woohoo!! excited to know what this is all about!
Jul 10, 2019 -
Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 4
Oh it is?? Yeah, that makes sense lol xD I%u2019m excited to uncover more!!!
Jun 26, 2019 -
Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 3
Makes sense! I did get that forgetful vibe, though!!
Jun 20, 2019 -
Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 1
Hey! Just a quick comment about the Ella section before I head over to chapter 3: I like how we get a bit more of Ella's personality and background here! ...
Jun 20, 2019 -
Re: When I Was Anna - 5
Oh okay. That makes a lot more sense haha!! :p
Jun 19, 2019 -
Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 1
Yay! I%u2019m excited to read more. That%u2019s quite the contest!
Jun 18, 2019 -
Re: When I Was Anna - 2
Oh dang :0 Yeah, my school doesn%u2019t even have a marching band, so I just have absolutely no idea hahaha
Jun 13, 2019 -
Re: Greta Thunberg as a Model Global Citizen
Aw man, that%u2019s too bad. Glad it helped anyway though!
May 13, 2019 -
Re: The Variants
Hey - I%u2019m a mod here on YWS. It%u2019s a bug - it happens sometimes. No worries though! I went ahead and deleted the other two comments. :)
Apr 11, 2019 -
Re: Peace and Peaches - Chapter 2
For some reason I JUST saw this. I must have missed the notification D: Anyway, thank you! I%u2019m always looking to improve my dialogue because I%u2019m definitely a more dialogue-heavy ...
Feb 24, 2019 -
Re: Peace and Peaches - Chapter 2
Thank you!! I will definitely work to add more sensory details to future chapters - I agree that I don%u2019t do much of that ahah. Thanks again!
Jan 17, 2019 -
Re: A little bit of love.
Ah I see! Glad it helped!
Jan 10, 2019 -
Re: No more tears (Draft 3.0)
Oh! Good luck with the contest! :)
Dec 28, 2018 -
Re: Blue Arrows ~ Chapter 4 ~ Truth
Yeah!!! Totally makes sense. That%u2019s good though, it eliminates the fear of being perfect haha
Dec 15, 2018 -
Re: No more tears
Sure, I%u2019d love to give my thoughts on a rewrite!
Dec 13, 2018
