Raindeer

Thank you! I really appreciate your comment.

Oh I had no troubles with the pace at all! The end is *maybe* a little quick in comparison with everything else, but I think if Frieda described the inside ...

Ah okay, that totally makes more sense! Thanks for explaining.

This was a grim chapter. Castle's pain is really evident - she's grouchy and angry and sad and bitter - and I'm really enjoying seeing that through her actions and ...

This was a great second chapter. I'm loving the idea of alternating between past/present Castle. By the way, the names are awesome. The balance between fun and intense in this ...

Heya! Just reading over the previous chapters before reviewing, and I decided just to leave a short comment - this is a really good start! I love how you're balancing ...

I totally do the description thing too, just thought I%u2019d point it out!:) Pacing - I thought it was totally fine! Nothing felt especially fast/slow to me. The first scene ...

Ah, I see - with that comment, I can definitely see how that%u2019s contributing to Marin%u2019s impulsive and fairly inconsiderate behavior. And woohoo, I%u2019m glad I got the meaning! I ...

Thanks so much!

Oh I love how they are interested by songs! I haven%u2019t listened to the Nightwish songs before so I%u2019ll go listen to those. Glad the review helped!

Woohoo! I%u2019m excited to read the next chapter!

Thank you so much! I appreciate your thoughts and interpretations. It was actually meant to be kind of unanswered & mysterious (although I%u2019m thinking about expanding it) but I was ...

I%u2019ll keep that in mind when I edit!! Thank you!

Hi! Thanks so much for your review. I definitely agree with finding a way to express her emotions in a different way; if/when I go back to edit, I will ...

Yeah! I love this idea of giving him a bit of time with the reader.