Raindeer

Thanks for your feedback! I'll try and fix that a little more - about the reactions and stuff. Thanks :)

No problem! We all have our "not do good" works every now and then. The edited version is very nice, by the way :)

Ah, I see. No problem, description and imagery is always the hardest for me to write about too. And you're very welcome ^_^

Thanks for the review! A lot of people had said it would be a good poem, so I'll probably make a poem version of it. :P

Thank you :)

Haha, thanks. It was specifically to you :P There are some not-shy people out there who are really nice.

Thanks ^_^

;)

Er, wait, welcome BACK to YWS :P

Thank you! :) Also welcome to YWS~

Oh, I'm happy you liked it :P

O.O Wow. Ahem. Thank you. That really means a lot.

Thanks for the nitpicks :D

Thank you for the tips! Yep- I know. More description. Bah. So hard. But, I try!

Okay :D