Raindeer

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Ahhh, makes total sense! No problem, and cannot wait for more :)

Aw yay! Well you will find many people on YWS who are excited to read other people%u2019s work! Welcome to YWS by the way!! ^~^

Yay! Glad I could help a little. :) Hmmm, I enjoyed The Stranger enough! It definitely was not my favorite read, but it is soo quick to read through because ...

Why on Earth did this make me giggle? I am from the Underworld. I do not giggle. Hahahaha. :) Thanks so much for your review!! I am so glad you ...

Hiya Vita, thanks so much for your review!! I definitely agree with you about the Duncan inviting her thing%u2014a bit abrupt for sure, and I hope to work on that ...

Thanks so much for the review Geo! I really appreciate it. And a late welcome to YWS! :)

Ugh, yeah I hate that! And then you have to remember what parts you italicized :%u2019( And yeah, magic systems are super tough!! (Imo one of the hardest things about ...

You are welcome! Looking forward to reading the other story!

Ah okay, glad that the perspective swapping will be toned down! I think it works well for this chapter, but many swaps each chapter might make my head go crazy ...

Thank you so much!! This is really helpful. I'm glad the characters weren't too overwhelming, but I definitely agree about adding a bit more explanation to Kasra and Honeydew!

Thank you so much for your comments!! I really appreciate it. As for Kasra calling Snowdrop "Snow" -- Kasra is actually an advisor to the crown, so she's a lot ...

Cool! I%u2019m excited to read more and learn more about the world!

Hey Harry, thanks so much for your review! I notice I tend to place sentences in awkward spots at times (like the one you pointed out in your second comment), ...

Ah, thanks for answering my questions!