Raindeer

Sweet! Let me take a look!

No critique here, but I love the play with language: - the way "anomaly" is misspelled to represent the word anomaly itself - the typo in typo - the break ...

Hey wayward, I don't have any feedback, really, but just wanted to comment how lovely this song is. It is so beautiful. I love the sad (but also hopeful), magical, ...

Hi Winny, thanks so much! I completely agree about the ending being anticlimactic... if I get around to revising this I%u2019m definitely going to keep note of that. Thank you!:)

Aw thanks for the review! I especially appreciate your comments about the main character and the personality. :) Also thanks for that typo catch... eek!

Oh I had no idea there was a difference with italics between YA/adult fiction. I mean it still works either way because I could still tell when the thoughts were. ...

Good idea! And you're welcome! :)

OMG OK that makes so much more sense hahahah. xP

Thank you so much for your review!!! I totally agree about the bracelet thing, and it will be something I will hopefully tidy up a bit more in the next ...

Thank you so much for your review!

Ahhh the anthill thing makes so much more sense hehe :) And I am excited for part 2!

Ah no problem! And I just realized this was from last year haha, good luck on your rewrite!

What a lovely poem! I think a lot of us writers can resonate with the feeling of our heads too far in the clouds. I love how your poem sort ...

Thank you for your review! I agree that the whole getting-Lila-on-board thing is a bit weird and I'm glad you pointed that out -- it will definitely be something I ...

Thank you so much for your review!! Ah you are so right about the Duncan carrying sword things... I even thought about writing about it and ended up not lolol. ...