Raindeer

YAY another character. I already love Ujalaa with my whole heart!! I'm curious why Akol referred to her as a "slave" though, but then later trainee - it feels a ...

Happy Review Day! Okay, I'm really enjoying this - I think I'm enjoying it more now that we've entered into this other realm (the Ditch)? I just love the slight ...

Hey green! Wowie okay, intense chapter. The description of Castle’s depression and her grief is so well done. We can see it in her flat, in the way she describes ...

Hey there! Yay, I love 11 year old perspective Castle chapters. I love the complete mood switch between each chapter - when Castle is older, the tone of the chapters ...

Hi!! Oh boy I’m a little behind but I’m going to try and catch up over the next week! This chapter was great. I love the light bickering between Will ...

Heya Hedwiggle! Haha so I'm loving this. Based off the last chapter's ending, I really thought something bad was going to happen - and I like how everything seems to ...

Hi Lib! (Instinct!) Hedwiggle! I'm so excited you've decided to hit the supernatural-fantasy genre. It's exciting! So far, I think your chapter is set up excellently. We have Will and ...

Hey there! This is a really interesting piece. I loved the repetition of Melissa’s thoughts of “keep moving” throughout the story. I think it really enhances the horrific, intense mystery ...

Hi there! This review may just be a little rambly, but I really wanted to review this because I thought it was a really neat piece! So, here we go. ...

Hello IamI! I absolutely looove fairy tales, so I was really intrigued to read this! I find that reading original fairy tales is just so fun - keeping a classic ...

Hi writerkitty! Here as requested. First things first, I love the title! I don't have many guesses about what it's about but I love the "R" alliteration and Ruulan is ...

Hello! I had some spare time on this lovely Saturday night and decided to read this! So let’s hop right in. First off, I really loved the descriptions throughout. I ...

Ahhhh!!! It's the end! That's exciting and kinda sad but SO AWESOME! What a conclusion! I love seeing Julia's life 14 years in the future. And I'm sooo glad there's ...

Liberty! Hello! Omggg, congrats on completing your novel! That's such a big accomplishment. It's been so fun reading this as you've been writing it (and I've still got the epilogue ...

Hiya LZ! Happy Review Day! I really hope this paper isn't due yet and my review may help somewhat - but if you've already turned it in, maybe you can ...