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Re: Chapter 2
Yo, yo, yo! So, I'm sorry I haven't read the previous chapter but hopefully this one will still be helpful anyway! From this chapter it seems like Lindsey and Jake ...
Mar 24, 2017 -
Re: The Last Bounty [RC:R2]
Hi Mea! Unfortunately I'm writing this review on my phone so if autocorrect does anything weird ... I'm sorry. I loved the beginning much more than the previous version - ...
Mar 23, 2017 -
Re: Seeing Lisa [RC:R2]
Hey niteowl! I didn't get the chance to review your piece last round but here I am for this round! I think the more simplistic but emotion-filled approach was well ...
Mar 21, 2017 -
Re: Anger
Hey Mockingjay! Poems about emotions are always get because the readers are able to have an instant connection with the poem. Everyone gets angry; anger is inside everyone. So I ...
Mar 20, 2017 -
Re: Starting a love story
Heyo! So first kind of a late welcome to YWS but a welcome nonetheless! I think this was a pretty good start to your story. Gia seems like an interesting ...
Mar 20, 2017 -
Re: Just Another Day (Chapter-2)
Hey Lily! Hope you don't mind that I'm dropping by for a review. (And I apologize for not reading chapter 1). So, I'm guessing Kelsy is a new girl at ...
Mar 18, 2017 -
Re: The Last Bounty [RC:R1]
Hiii Mea
Mar 17, 2017 -
Re: Huntress: Chapter 3.1- Kennel [Edited; LMS]
Hey! Oooh, so what an exciting chapter. I really thought the emotion was strong in this one - Agrona really seemed pretty mad/brave and I loved the way she acted. ...
Mar 16, 2017 -
Re: Life is Strange Chapter 1
Hey! So I'm loving this plot. Fantasy in a real world is the type of stuff I absolutely love to read - I think reading about modern characters who encounter ...
Mar 15, 2017 -
Re: Mr. Adkins [RC: R1]
Hey PrincessInk! Soo, I really liked the concept of this story! It was interesting to read and it kind of reminded me of To Kill a Mockingbird (Millie's and Mr. ...
Mar 14, 2017 -
Re: Chapter 1> The moon
Hey there Aries! So, this was an interesting start. I'm liking this concept - the moon as the main character (or one of the characters) - and it's pretty fascinating. ...
Mar 11, 2017 -
Re: Everything you do
Hey there Charlotte! So I wanted to start out by saying that I'm so sorry you're going through bullying (I read your reply to the review below) and I know ...
Mar 10, 2017 -
Re: The Ticket to Trust CH.3- Suppertime
Hey! I apologize in advance for not reading previous chapters, but I hope that's all right anyway! Also, I'm writing this review on my phone so that may be the ...
Mar 9, 2017 -
Re: Huntress: Chapter 2.3- Pride [Edited; LMS]
Oooh, this chapter made me nervous! The anxiety of Agrona really came through and I myself was a bit worried about whether Kennewick would find them out or not. I ...
Mar 8, 2017 -
Re: Huntress: Chapter 2.2- Pride [Edited; LMS]
Hi! Oooh, I'm excited to see how this goes out! The ending definitely makes me want to read the third part. Also, I like how we get to see more ...
Mar 7, 2017