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  • Short Story » Romantic, Supernatural Re: Seeing Lisa [RC:R2]

    Hey niteowl! I didn't get the chance to review your piece last round but here I am for this round! I think the more simplistic but emotion-filled approach was well ...

    Mar 21, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Anger

    Hey Mockingjay! Poems about emotions are always get because the readers are able to have an instant connection with the poem. Everyone gets angry; anger is inside everyone. So I ...

    Mar 20, 2017
  • Short Story » Romantic, Romantic Re: Starting a love story

    Heyo! So first kind of a late welcome to YWS but a welcome nonetheless! I think this was a pretty good start to your story. Gia seems like an interesting ...

    Mar 20, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Just Another Day (Chapter-2)

    Hey Lily! Hope you don't mind that I'm dropping by for a review. (And I apologize for not reading chapter 1). So, I'm guessing Kelsy is a new girl at ...

    Mar 18, 2017
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Last Bounty [RC:R1]

    Hiii Mea

    Mar 17, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Huntress: Chapter 3.1- Kennel [Edited; LMS]

    Hey! Oooh, so what an exciting chapter. I really thought the emotion was strong in this one - Agrona really seemed pretty mad/brave and I loved the way she acted. ...

    Mar 16, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Life is Strange Chapter 1

    Hey! So I'm loving this plot. Fantasy in a real world is the type of stuff I absolutely love to read - I think reading about modern characters who encounter ...

    Mar 15, 2017
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: Mr. Adkins [RC: R1]

    Hey PrincessInk! Soo, I really liked the concept of this story! It was interesting to read and it kind of reminded me of To Kill a Mockingbird (Millie's and Mr. ...

    Mar 14, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Literature Re: Chapter 1> The moon

    Hey there Aries! So, this was an interesting start. I'm liking this concept - the moon as the main character (or one of the characters) - and it's pretty fascinating. ...

    Mar 11, 2017
  • Script » Other, General Re: Everything you do

    Hey there Charlotte! So I wanted to start out by saying that I'm so sorry you're going through bullying (I read your reply to the review below) and I know ...

    Mar 10, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: The Ticket to Trust CH.3- Suppertime

    Hey! I apologize in advance for not reading previous chapters, but I hope that's all right anyway! Also, I'm writing this review on my phone so that may be the ...

    Mar 9, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Huntress: Chapter 2.3- Pride [Edited; LMS]

    Oooh, this chapter made me nervous! The anxiety of Agrona really came through and I myself was a bit worried about whether Kennewick would find them out or not. I ...

    Mar 8, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Huntress: Chapter 2.2- Pride [Edited; LMS]

    Hi! Oooh, I'm excited to see how this goes out! The ending definitely makes me want to read the third part. Also, I like how we get to see more ...

    Mar 7, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Huntress: Chapter 2.1- Pride [Edited; LMS]

    Yo, featherstone! Interesting chapter. We get to know more about this village (clan? village? tribe?) she joined and not a ton was revealed but enough to keep me engaged! I ...

    Mar 7, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: Unsafe ~ Chapter 7

    Hey dogs! Awesome chapter - we found out about a lot and Irene and Izzy are friends again. Irene seems to become friends with Izzy very quickly, and I understand ...

    Mar 6, 2017


There are those who say that life is like a book, with chapters for each event in your life and a limited number of pages on which you can spend your time. But I prefer to think that a book is like a life, particularly a good one, which is well to worth staying up all night to finish.
— Lemony Snicket