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RainbowCereal

  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: You Should Know I'll Be There for You

    tysm!! i really appreciate the feedback (esp since run on sentences have always been an issue i've struggled with) & i'll prob go back over this with everything you've said ...

    Aug 2, 2021
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Home

    Thank you so much!! If I could ask, what parts were confusing to read? I did put a lot of emotion into this, but I'd also really like to be ...

    Aug 1, 2021
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: New Beginnings

    Hey!! I'm back again with another review, lol. The beginning was really well done! I like that you started off with the books; it was specific and vague enough that ...

    Aug 1, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Vincent

    this is a short piece focusing on this character up to where he is when the main story starts! just to help me understand him better, if that makes sense, ...

    Mar 25, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Vincent

    thank you so much!! :D vincent is actually a side character in a story already, so this is more of a character study! i'm planning on one more part for ...

    Mar 24, 2021
  • Art » Literature, Dramatic Re: Breathe Through It

    i really appreciate the review!! and also appreciate that u enjoyed Recovery Paragraph especially, i tend to end a lot of pieces like this on sad notes and at the ...

    Jan 28, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Health Re: ​Steam Off a Cup

    Oh I absolutely adore this (tho I may be biased as someone who also loves coffee). It's simple, light-hearted, and very fun to read!! Keep up the good work!! I ...

    Jan 28, 2021
  • Poetry » Narrative, Health Re: you have a tic disorder

    This has a lot of really well conveyed feeling! The structure of it was really nice and I felt like you did a good job of saying what you needed ...

    Jan 27, 2021
  • Art » Other, Dramatic Re: Moonlight

    Thank you for commenting!! I'm really glad it left such an impression on you; it's a personal piece and it's always nice to see ppl who understand what you're putting ...

    Jan 27, 2021
  • Art » Other, Dramatic Re: Moonlight

    You're right on the nose actually!! It's a piece about feeling resentful towards the people around you while at the same time having a hard time swallowing that you also ...

    Jan 27, 2021
  • Other » Dramatic, Other Re: I'm getting better

    I appreciate the feedback a lot!! I haven't been doing a whole lot of sharing recently and it feels really nice to be putting things out there again. And you're ...

    Aug 22, 2019
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Other Re: On Feeling Helpless

    I'm really glad that you think so! OuO Thank you for taking the time to review!

    Feb 3, 2015
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Other Re: On Feeling Helpless

    I'm really glad you found it relatable. ouo; I myself have had quite a few friends who struggled with depression, but I still worried that the feeling wouldn't get across. ...

    Feb 3, 2015
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Other Re: On Feeling Helpless

    I'm really glad you like it! ^^ I don't have anything with these characters uploaded at the moment, eh heh, but I plan to have something in the near future. ...

    Feb 2, 2015
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Other Re: On Feeling Helpless

    Hey, that's coolio. I appreciate that you took the time to review at all ^^ I'm sure you're a fab writer =w=

    Jan 29, 2015


You know what the big problem is in telling fantasy and reality apart? They're both ridiculous.
— The 12th Doctor