RainGrae

Thanks for the review!^_^ this will definitely come to mind when I continue to write. The rhyming does control a little of what I want to say so I'll try ...

Thank you :) I wrote it just before I fell asleep from a really depressing day!

I loved this poem

Thank you so much for that amazing review. It helped a lot with my view of the poem. Your general suggestions seem to help with other works I am currently ...

Aw, thank you! I'm currently working on improving my story-telling skills.

Hello W&W :) For a poem so short, it was well written. It has so much story behind it that the poem becomes a mystery. But I suggest you should ...

Thank you :) I was stepping a bit over to the danger zone about writing this poem for the public but it's nice to let out emotions, even anonymously.

I love the short story. Even the first sentence hooked me. I am now one of your biggest fans ^_^