Raf99

Thankyou for such a detailed review. Like many of my other stories, I do a bit of what I consider to be an enticing blurb, as you noted. It's kind ...

Thankyou for your review, it's very satisfying to see you pick up on the same themes and thoughts that I was having, in respect to the protagonist. I do now ...

Thankyou for such a great review. I have gone overboard on my commas, and I'm not sure I've even edited this once. This is my verbal vomit, and reviews like ...

Thank you so much for the review. It's very encouraging to hear how much someone likes it. I think you've read it exactly how I intended it to be read. ...

Thanks for the review, Andrew. I definitely need to go over my transitions between scenes. In my head I've got it all thought out, of course, but reading over it ...

I totally agree. Sometimes I add so much detail to small little scenes, and just start whizzing through descriptions for scenes that really should be the ones that are described ...

Lol, Elliott was deciding whether to wear a "lipstick-red" tie (the colour), or a black one. I should've made that more clear. But thank you so much for doing such ...