Raf99

Thanks for another review, Andrew. I was waiting for a review of this one, and I'm grateful it's so extensive. I think with both this story and Exploding Office, I've ...

Thank you so much for the review. It's very encouraging to hear how much someone likes it. I think you've read it exactly how I intended it to be read. ...

Thanks for the review, Andrew. I definitely need to go over my transitions between scenes. In my head I've got it all thought out, of course, but reading over it ...

I totally agree. Sometimes I add so much detail to small little scenes, and just start whizzing through descriptions for scenes that really should be the ones that are described ...

Lol, Elliott was deciding whether to wear a "lipstick-red" tie (the colour), or a black one. I should've made that more clear. But thank you so much for doing such ...