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Re: The Harvest - Chapters 4 and 5
Thanks for this review, I really appreciate it.
Sep 4, 2020 -
Re: The Harvest - Chapter 3
Thank you for the review!
Jul 20, 2020 -
Re: The Harvest - Chapter 2
Thanks for the amazing feedback! With the "Oh yeah, the cell phone tower fell down" part, that was a copy and paste error. With the Razr, I'm trying to give ...
Jul 17, 2020 -
Re: broken hymns, mysterious hues
*Claps*
Jul 16, 2020 -
Re: a question to society part one
That's a good question.
Jul 15, 2020 -
Re: The Harvest - Chapter I
Thank you for the amazing feedback!
Jul 15, 2020 -
Re: The Harvest - Chapter I
Thank you so much for the amazing feedback. I didn't even think about why the characters where reacting to the cell phone tower the way they did.
Jul 15, 2020 -
Re: Madrassi and the Monsoon (Part of my Kurunchi Anthology series)
Hi steffenate! This is such a amazing flash fiction. I would suggest trying to figure out how to break up the paragraphs. It felt a little static. Honestly, that's all ...
Jul 14, 2020 -
Re: The Harvest - Prologue
Hi Prim Rose! To answer your question, I will be continuing this into a novel! You were fairly spot on with the theme. I'm also adding some sci-fi elements into ...
Jul 14, 2020 -
Re: Chapter 1
Hey! I know I'm a little late to review this, but here it goes. You did great at the story but it was kind of hard to read. It didn't ...
Jul 14, 2020 -
Re: The Harvest - Prologue
Thank you for the amazing feedback!
Jul 13, 2020