RachelLescano

There are no major mistakes that had been seen in your essay. Simplicity of the words used made your article to be easily understood by everyone. Certain points were properly ...

"For instance, one can just relax on his couch, watch television, and use his remote control to change the channel after a weighty and exhausting day." I like this line. ...

The article you have written was good. There are minor corrections which needs minor editing, but as a whole, the article still delivered the facts and information about technology. Nice ...

The title made me more interested to read it. And from it, I can say you will be talking about two opposite sides of a certain topic. And here: "There ...