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RachelJY

  • Poetry » Culture, General Re: Lost God

    I really like this, it very simply shows how Man has slowly lost sight of God. I especially like the first paragraph, cause even when man refuses to acknowledge Him, ...

    Oct 2, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Catharsis

    Hey I'm Rachel and I'll be reviwing for you today. I can look into the ceiling like a well. Not even clocks move clockwise. Who needs innocence when there are ...

    Nov 29, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Silver Chains~ Chapter 1

    Wow...Completely amazing. I loved it! It's flawless. It showed how much we see set things in a set way. Instead of the usually thing of dragons being uncaring , you ...

    Oct 16, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Chapter 1

    First, you need a title, but I'm asuming you'll add that later. Second, I really like the story line,and I am waiting to read more. I'm looking forward to reading ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: A Testimony By Faith

    I like that you feel completely free sharing your testimony. I have grown up in a christian home, but I never truly understood what it all meant untill I was ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: How Long Can YOU Cheat Death w/ Thirteen Days Till Midnight

    This sounds like a great book/idea for a story. I want to see more about it. If it is a book and you are simply reviewing it, I want to ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Thursday- YWS chat Parody

    Loved it! Lol so loud! reminds me of the lyrics my friends and I sing in class to this song. Although, we never actualy write them down or remember them. ...

    Sep 21, 2011


We are discreet sheep; we wait to see how the drove is going, and then go with the drove.
— Mark Twain