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Hi there! I'm Rach, here to review! Whoa! That was one jam-packed chapter. Well, that was one jam-packed pair of chapters. One jam-packed day, really. Your main character here leaves ...

I read this back when you first posted, and now I'm wishing I'd replied then. I think I'm territorial over reviewing grounds. Which is sort of pathetic, now that I ...

Aww, a short and sweet prologue. I thought it was cute. Don't know if that was exactly what you were going for, but there it is. Anyway, hi! The name's ...

Hi Asteral! The name's Rach and I'm here to review! First, I should say that I haven't read the prologue you referred to, but I think I followed along well ...

Hi there! Name's Rach, and I'm reviewing... obviously. :) Or, I would review in more detail, but I think I'm missing something with this piece. It doesn't seem complete to ...

Oh, something was so intriguing about this. Somewhere whilst reading, I forgot that I was looking for grammar and such and just kept reading on. I liked the characters, the ...

Wowza. That was a long post. Maybe split your chapters into two for posting purposes? Usually garners up more readers, especially when the grammar's clean and spelling is standard, like ...

I like that ending line. The 'yep' made it, added an air of nonchalance, recognition of the simultaneous mundanity and peculiarity of it. I also really liked the reference to ...

First off, I love your signature to itty bitty pieces, and I might try it out as my own life motto. Bound to make things more exciting. But anyway, back ...

Reviewing Sunday review here! Quick and fast and then I'm off to the next! I agree with the others! What a neat twist at the end! I figured it out ...

This is a special Reviewing Satunday review! Not my usual sort, but fast and furious! Looks like you've got the classic "Modern Day Earth kid ends up in Ancient Land/Fantasy ...

Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay! Love! Hearts! Confetti! So much love for this story. I don't remember the last time I got to do my Confetti cheer, but it feels so good. :D You've ...

I like the idea of this a lot--as others have said, it's sweet but heartwrenching too--but I agree with Classy that the emotion of it isn't quite coming through. I ...

So, whoa. This... is superb. Your idea and concept is original, unique--the same extends to your characters and the setting. And your execution of the ideas, the characters, the setting, ...

So, what happened was pretty much this. Knowing that I didn't have enough time to review, I decided to preview everything requested on my WRFF thread for later this evening. ...