RachMilty

Thank you so much for your comments! They were very helpful

Thank you for your suggestions. I really love how you take the time to analyze my poems. Even I don't put that level of thought into the underlying message! Thank ...

About the non-edited version: as much as you may love something, if it's not as good as what you have changed it to, you must kiss it goodbye. It's gone, ...

Thank you so much for your review! I've been looking at that line for a while for the same reason.

This is gorgeous. Absolutely. The imagery is vivid and the wordplay clever. I also love your simile, describing the movement as ocean waves. Check for spelling though! You have an ...

Thank you so much for your review! I really love your suggestions and analysis.

Let me know what you think of my poem! More pieces will be coming soon!